short sales dictionary
I’m not a native speaker of English. Could you my short sentnces?
I like English because it is simple but delicate and there are many interesting books in English. So I used to practice English writing on my own with dictionary. But there are something difficult. Although I write it with dictionary , there is no way it is natural for natives to see.
So I’d like you to change my writing to be natural. You can change even all of words. I’d like to compare and contrast mine and yours and like to learn it. My writing is below.
@@@@@As she liked to land a position of technical sales, she met with a technical sales consultant ,Edwin who she hasn’t met before in person by searching the net and emailing him yesterday. Edwin was the team leader in Ace antenna corporation. @@@@@
Since she wanted to land a position in technical sales, she met with a technical sales consultant, Edwin. She hadn’t met him before in person, because she found him by searching the net and contacting him through email just the day before. Edwin was a team leader at Ace Antenna Corporation.
Dean Graziosi – Short Sale